Monday, 25 November 2013

Hiwi the kiwi writing

So, as you probably already know, a week or so ago, Hiwi the kiwi came to our school to teach us about boat safety. Now if you have been onto hiwi's website, he has a writing competition, and Mrs Cameron insisted on us putting in an entry. Anyway, enough delay, here is my entry.

On the stage was a kiwi,
He said that his name was Hiwi,
And Hiwi told us to keep fish in salt ice,
To make sure they don't rot cos it doesn't taste nice,
And Hiwi said in his booming large voice,
Not to take huge or small fish it's a bad choice,
He told us the importance of a life jacket,
And how we should always remember to pack it,
He said on a boat, you must always take care,
And wherever you are, take a flare,
Now I know this last one doesn't rhyme,
But please take the time,
To make sure you don't take far too much.

~ Olive

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